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Peace Heavy mk II

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  1. My first initial thoughts:

     

    -Intro was too long. I thought the small tonal change around 15 seconds was going to be the real start, but there's another 25 seconds of buildup after that.

     

    -You do repeat a main theme a couple of times in the song, and perform a couple of slight variants on it here and there. However, it felt like a couple of sections were disjointed and random for the sake of diversity, rather than adding to the idea as a whole. For example, when your drum structure changes around 1:50 to be less syncopated; not a bad idea, but there's a lack of context since it happens, then shortly bleeds out of that pattern without going back to it or playing off of it again.

     

    -You're good at writing buildup. I found myself anticipating the next section of the song because you led me to want to. However, I felt like a lot of times there wasn't significant payoff as a reward for that anticipation. (This could just be because this kind of bleak post-apocalyptic style isn't really my genre of choice. I'm trying to be objective about musical structure, rather than the content itself).

     

    -That ending was really nice. The way the beeps build up akin to how a lot of EDM songs do their first drop, then end in a flatline was a nice touch. It shows you put some thought into how it should end, rather than just fading to grey or something less deliberate.

     


  2. Kind of two weird examples today. The first, I think it is more coincidental, but I could be onto something.

     

    The main melody of the song "After Dark" by Seraphim Shock sounds a lot like Aliene Mariage's "SUICIDE," just at 1/3 the tempo and without the cRaZy vKeI VoCaLs ayiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

     

    edit: it'd be really great is the spoiler tags weren't eating each other

     

     

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    Now, this particular case I think is more of a coincidence, than a ripoff. While the Seraphim Shock song did come out first, I don't think they were popular enough for a relatively small (on a macro-scale) goth band across the world to pick up their albums and thing "...huh, I could be a prettier version of this!!" That being said, I have seen people say Aliene "borrowed" from Slipknot on their 2nd album, so it's not an impossible thing to imagine. However, I am leaning towards this sample being a weird, but cool, similarity.

     

     

    Example number two:

     

    "Brave Heart," from the Digimon OST vs L'arc~en~ciel's "Vivid Colors"

     

     

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    Now in this case, I do think some "inspiration" shenanigans had been had. (Thanks to Larc for uploading their stuff to Spotify!) I hadn't noticed this similarity before, as I hadn't heard this album until today lololol . The L'arc album came out in 1994 and the Ayumi Miyazaki song is from 1999. How the turns have tabled!

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