DEG - The Final (2013 ver.) vocal cover

[StriderSubzero 53]

I ran out of time on this one (didn't do the middle part of the song between each chorus) so I hope to do a real cover and use an actual mic and so forth eventually, but I just wanted to get some feedback on a quick and dirty run-through of the song. I feel like I should mention that I don't speak Japanese and just learned the lyrics phonetically, so I apologize in advance for butchering the language.

 

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