lichtlune 915 Posted March 6, 2013 I saw a lot of covers and things here so i figured it would be an alright place to post some of my stuff here https://soundcloud.com/user9042561 some demo's of my project and some covers too to check out Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Peace Heavy mk II 7200 Posted March 7, 2013 Nice work with some of the baroque-inspired instrumentals. With the songs that you actually sing in, be careful with your phrasing--at some points during the chorus of "Disregard" you tended to drag a little. I'm not sure if that's a side effect of the vocal style you're trying to emulate or not, but other people who do sing in a similar manner, such as Juka or GPK, do tend to do the same as well (especially towards the end of a melodic sentence. Moi Dix Mois' first album was full of problems like this). Good phrasing can make a relatively boring song sound good, and poor phrasing can make a fantastic song sound muddy and awkward. Anyway, keep up the good progress! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lichtlune 915 Posted March 10, 2013 Nice work with some of the baroque-inspired instrumentals. With the songs that you actually sing in, be careful with your phrasing--at some points during the chorus of "Disregard" you tended to drag a little. I'm not sure if that's a side effect of the vocal style you're trying to emulate or not, but other people who do sing in a similar manner, such as Juka or GPK, do tend to do the same as well (especially towards the end of a melodic sentence. Moi Dix Mois' first album was full of problems like this). Good phrasing can make a relatively boring song sound good, and poor phrasing can make a fantastic song sound muddy and awkward. Anyway, keep up the good progress! thank you, a lot of these covers and recordings are older and only in demo form but we have many albums that we're working on and almost finished with a album Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lichtlune 915 Posted April 5, 2013 (edited) no Edited January 3, 2018 by lichtlune Share this post Link to post Share on other sites